[stylist] JLA poetry collection

[Barbara HAMMEL]

Jennifer, your poems definitely are written in today's kind of poetry. I'm asmuming that first one is about a cane? I love that it's called Jesse, that's my oldest son's name. I did see a few spelling errors. Just like all us, some of the lines could probably use a bit of work.
Personally, I'm a bad one to critique your morpoetry because I'm the oddball metered, rhymer on the list. I was born a century or two too late. I did like that you have a variety of kinds of poems here. 
Keep writing.
Barbara
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> On Nov 3, 2015, at 09:52, Jennifer Applegate via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Hello all,
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> Please find my attached poem collection for any one who wants to read them
> and provide me feedback.
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> Thank you,
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> Jennifer Applegate
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> <JLA poetry collection.docx>
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