[stylist] Revised Apple I am thoughts

Jennifer Applegate jlastar at comcast.net
Fri Nov 13 14:48:18 UTC 2015


Hello all,

Perhaps my first and last stanza need to be stronger by including what Adam
and Eve used for clothing after they sinned i.e. figs and plants. Perhaps I
could also be more specific about the wife's name instead of just "My wife."




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