[stylist] Workshopping: Lucy and Lithe Chapters 1, 2 and a bit of 3

[Debby Phillips]

Theea, I loved your story.  It held my interest, first of all.  I 
also found your characters very believable.  And I absolutely 
loved how you brought your Christian beliefs into this story of 
the future.  I could feel the despair of the parents, and 
understood Lucy's terror.  I hope that you send this somewhere to 
be published.  The one thing I was wondering about though: how 
would they live in forty below temperatures? And how were they 
going to get there? Maybe you'll write a sequel?    Blessings,    
Debby