[stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

[Miss Thea]

Thank you so much, Jamie.
Well, back to young Lucy. I think she's tired of being in freeze frame. 
Haha.
Thea




Thea Ramsay
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-----Original Message----- 
From: Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter via stylist
Sent: Monday, September 21, 2015 6:54 AM
To: 'Jamie Allison' ; 'Writers' Division Mailing List'
Cc: Bridgit Kuenning-Pollpeter
Subject: Re: [stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

Jamie,

It's always fine to post feedback on material members post to Stylist on the 
listserve itself. One of the many purposes of Stylist is to provide feedback 
to those requesting it. So no problems, and unless a specific person request 
feedback be given off-list, it's totally appropriate to post critiques on 
Stylist itself.

Bridgit

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Jamie Allison 
via stylist
Sent: Sunday, September 20, 2015 5:55 PM
To: Writers' Division Mailing List <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Cc: Jamie Allison <goalgirl at bellsouth.net>
Subject: Re: [stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

Miss Thea,
I read your submission today and wanted to say that you have me intrigued! I 
love your descriptive language (but thankful all the while that at times it 
wasn't too descriptive) and how your writing style makes the story flow from 
one part to the next. I really want to find out what happens next! I am 
hoping that sending this (as it's positive feedback) to the entire group is 
the right protocol for positive and more or less general response. I am sure 
there are times when it may be better to contact only the person who wrote 
the message and will do this instead if this is what is preferable.  Jamie 
Allison National Federation of the Blind - Cherokee Chapter President Lead 
Instructor, NFB BELL in SC The National Federation of the Blind knows that 
blindness is not the characteristic that defines you or your future. Every 
day we raise the expectations of blind people, because low expectations 
create obstacles between blind people and our dreams. You can have the life 
you want; blindness is not what holds you back. To make a donation to the 
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www.nfb.org/ImaginingOurFuture.
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