[stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

Mon Sep 21 10:54:40 UTC 2015

Jamie,

It's always fine to post feedback on material members post to Stylist on the listserve itself. One of the many purposes of Stylist is to provide feedback to those requesting it. So no problems, and unless a specific person request feedback be given off-list, it's totally appropriate to post critiques on Stylist itself.

Bridgit

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From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Jamie Allison via stylist
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Subject: Re: [stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

Miss Thea,
I read your submission today and wanted to say that you have me intrigued! I love your descriptive language (but thankful all the while that at times it wasn't too descriptive) and how your writing style makes the story flow from one part to the next. I really want to find out what happens next! I am hoping that sending this (as it's positive feedback) to the entire group is the right protocol for positive and more or less general response. I am sure there are times when it may be better to contact only the person who wrote the message and will do this instead if this is what is preferable.  Jamie Allison National Federation of the Blind - Cherokee Chapter President Lead Instructor, NFB BELL in SC The National Federation of the Blind knows that blindness is not the characteristic that defines you or your future. Every day we raise the expectations of blind people, because low expectations create obstacles between blind people and our dreams. You can have the life you want; blindness is not what holds you back. To make a donation to the National Federation of the Blind Imagination Fund campaign, please visit www.nfb.org/ImaginingOurFuture.
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