[stylist] Workshopping: Lucy and Lithe Chapters 1, 2 and a bit of 3

[Barbara HAMMEL]

Debby, she hasn't finished the story. As for forty below temps, people live in those all the time in the winter in Canada.
Barbara

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> On Sep 20, 2015, at 18:28, Debby Phillips via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Theea, I loved your story.  It held my interest, first of all.  I also found your characters very believable.  And I absolutely loved how you brought your Christian beliefs into this story of the future.  I could feel the despair of the parents, and understood Lucy's terror.  I hope that you send this somewhere to be published.  The one thing I was wondering about though: how would they live in forty below temperatures? And how were they going to get there? Maybe you'll write a sequel?    Blessings,    Debby
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