[stylist] Greetings from a returning member

[John J. Boyer]

Hi Shawn,

Thanks for taking a look. I'm rather reluctant to post chapters to the 
list, because I feel that the Web gives a better experience. But I'll 
think about it.

John
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ed, Feb 24, 2016 at 07:17:27PM +0000, Jacobson, Shawn D via stylist wrote:
> John
> 
> I will definitely read this; one thing the world needs is more Christian science fiction.
> 
> It might be a while before I give you a full review (I am sneaking peaks at this while at work) so stay tuned.
> 
> I did notice a couple of things early on.  You have "the the" in an early paragraph (lose one of the "the"s).
> 
> Also you don't have to say "The garage door opened at his command".  You can say "the garage door opened"; the "at his command" part can be implied.
> 
> Anyway the best.
> 
> Shawn Jacobson
> 
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> Subject: [stylist] Greetings from a returning member
> 
> Hello,
> 
> Some of you may recognize my name as the originator of the liblouis Braille translation and back-translation software. I was on Stylist years ago, but I let my subscription lapse. Computer programming and advancing age were too demanding. Now I have retired as a software engineer. I'm trying to make a new career writing Christian science fiction. You can find my WIP by going to http://godtouches.org then stories. This will bring up a list of stories. The science-fiction one is "Space Friends Indeed". I would be really happy to hear your thoughts on it.
> 
> Thanks,
> John
> 
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John J. Boyer, Executive Director
GodTouches Digital Ministry, Inc.
http://www.godtouches.org
Madison, Wisconsin, USA
Peace, Love, Service