[stylist] Greetings from a returning member

[Shelley Alongi]

I used my iPhone to read your story off the web and it was very easy to navigate.

Shelley, Queen of Bells Out!

See Trespasser, my first published novel at lulu.com
http://www.lulu.com/Queenofbells712

> On Feb 24, 2016, at 3:01 PM, John J. Boyer via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Shawn,
> 
> Thanks for taking a look. I'm rather reluctant to post chapters to the 
> list, because I feel that the Web gives a better experience. But I'll 
> think about it.
> 
> John
> On W
> ed, Feb 24, 2016 at 07:17:27PM +0000, Jacobson, Shawn D via stylist wrote:
>> John
>> 
>> I will definitely read this; one thing the world needs is more Christian science fiction.
>> 
>> It might be a while before I give you a full review (I am sneaking peaks at this while at work) so stay tuned.
>> 
>> I did notice a couple of things early on.  You have "the the" in an early paragraph (lose one of the "the"s).
>> 
>> Also you don't have to say "The garage door opened at his command".  You can say "the garage door opened"; the "at his command" part can be implied.
>> 
>> Anyway the best.
>> 
>> Shawn Jacobson
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of John J. Boyer via stylist
>> Sent: Wednesday, February 24, 2016 12:07 PM
>> To: stylist at nfbnet.org
>> Cc: John J. Boyer
>> Subject: [stylist] Greetings from a returning member
>> 
>> Hello,
>> 
>> Some of you may recognize my name as the originator of the liblouis Braille translation and back-translation software. I was on Stylist years ago, but I let my subscription lapse. Computer programming and advancing age were too demanding. Now I have retired as a software engineer. I'm trying to make a new career writing Christian science fiction. You can find my WIP by going to http://godtouches.org then stories. This will bring up a list of stories. The science-fiction one is "Space Friends Indeed". I would be really happy to hear your thoughts on it.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> John
>> 
>> -- 
>> John J. Boyer, Executive Director
>> GodTouches Digital Ministry, Inc.
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>> Madison, Wisconsin, USA
>> Peace, Love, Service
>> 
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> Madison, Wisconsin, USA
> Peace, Love, Service
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