[stylist] How is My Attempt at Second Person?
Vejas Vasiliauskas
alpineimagination at gmail.com
Tue Jun 28 05:05:44 UTC 2016
Hi,
I have not finished this story yet, but was wondering, with the
little bit that I have, if it is going in the right direction
with its use of second-person. Does it flow? Any comments at
all, especially constructive criticism, are welcome.
Thanks,
Vejas
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