[Stylist] question about wording in line of my acrostic poem in progress

[Barbara HAMMEL]

I concur with "bowed to". A person not familiar with what you are writing about would wonder did the kings lay below the baby or did they lay their gifts below the baby or what does this mean. 
Barbara Hammel

> On Feb 27, 2019, at 18:01, Vejas Vasiliauskas via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Hi Jennifer,
> I agree with "bow to." What word are you trying to spell throughout your astrostic?
> Vejas
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>> On 27 Feb 2019, at 15:43, Jennifer Applegate via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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>> Hello,
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>> Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?
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>> Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings laid
>> below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds proclaimed
>> birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"
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>> Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from large
>> army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed prophet's
>> servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest
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>> Thank you,
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>> Jennifer Applegate
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