[Stylist] Stylist Digest, Vol 178, Issue 16

Thu Feb 28 16:49:34 UTC 2019

Thank you for feedback on "laid below" or "bow to." I think I will use the
word knelt, because it will rhyme with angels.
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Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2019 17:43:31 -0600
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Hello,

Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?

Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings laid
below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds proclaimed
birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"

Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from large
army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed prophet's
servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest

Thank you,

Jennifer Applegate

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Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2019 18:52:33 -0500
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Hi,

New here but I vote "bow to". It compliments tge word "glory" on my opinion.
Then "laid below" sounds kinda vague for me because it gives me the tickling
of mind-humor... laid can be in different positions oppose to bow. I don't
think anyone can mistake bowing to a laid on your back.

On Wed, Feb 27, 2019, 6:44 PM Jennifer Applegate via Stylist <
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> Hello,
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> Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?
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> Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings 
> laid below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds 
> proclaimed birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"
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> Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from 
> large army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed 
> prophet's servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest
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> Thank you,
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> Jennifer Applegate
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Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2019 15:59:18 -0800
From: Vejas Vasiliauskas <alpineimagination at gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Stylist] question about wording in line of my acrostic
	poem in progress
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Hi Jennifer,
I agree with "bow to." What word are you trying to spell throughout your
astrostic?
Vejas

> On 27 Feb 2019, at 15:43, Jennifer Applegate via Stylist
<stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Hello,
> 
> Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?
> 
> Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings 
> laid below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds 
> proclaimed birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"
> 
> Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from 
> large army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed 
> prophet's servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest
> 
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> Thank you,
> 
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> Jennifer Applegate
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Message: 4
Date: Thu, 28 Feb 2019 03:55:03 +0000
From: Barbara HAMMEL <poetlori8 at msn.com>
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I concur with "bowed to". A person not familiar with what you are writing
about would wonder did the kings lay below the baby or did they lay their
gifts below the baby or what does this mean. 
Barbara Hammel

> On Feb 27, 2019, at 18:01, Vejas Vasiliauskas via Stylist
<stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Hi Jennifer,
> I agree with "bow to." What word are you trying to spell throughout your
astrostic?
> Vejas
> 
>> On 27 Feb 2019, at 15:43, Jennifer Applegate via Stylist
<stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Hello,
>> 
>> Does "bow to" or "laid below" sound better as in more specific?
>> 
>> Word of Father humbly breathed divine life into silent night, kings 
>> laid below Holy infant with frankincense, gold, and myrrh, shepherds 
>> proclaimed birth, angels announced "Glory to God in the highest"
>> 
>> Emmanuel walked with His sheep through valleys, protected Elisha from 
>> large army surrounding city with chariots during darkness, showed 
>> prophet's servant chariots of fire, multitude of  heavenly mightiest
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Thank you,
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Jennifer Applegate
>> 
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>> _______________________________________________
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>> http://writers.nfb.org/
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