[Stylist] New story

[Chris Kuell]

Hey Shawn,

 

Your story is a bit long, and there are probably more than a dozen typos
that I won't point out here. I enjoyed the conclusion about the Kree
'domesticating' other beings like we did to the dog, but for me, I'm not
sure the starting Bible verse works since the protagonist isn't religious at
all, and that's a pretty obscure quote.

 

Good luck finding a home for it.

 

Chris

 

PS: I like 'Final Analysis' as a nerd bar name.

 

 

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