[Stylist] Haiku for Spring

Jackie jackieleepoet at cox.net
Mon Mar 30 18:53:36 UTC 2020


Lynda,

A lovely Haiku.

It uses the syllable count I think of as the standard. Your directions to
the group had 3-5-3 instead. I thought that form had a different name. 

In the classroom, starting poetry classes always use the 5-7-5 form. I think
this is a bit less intimidating as it is a bit easier.

You are a connoisseur of the Japanese forms, so I would like comments. I am
not.

 

Jacqueline Williams

 

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     Jenny Xie

 

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Sunday PM Greetings.

This was what I experienced last evening when I was outside.

I had to come back to the house to bring my husband to experience this
exceptional evening.  Lynda

 

twilight vapor clouds
settle on dusky hillside
become indistinct

 

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