[Stylist] Trolley Ride flash fiction

Ericka dotwriter1 at gmail.com
Sun Oct 18 22:06:18 UTC 2020


Hundreds in my WI county have died. This is a real challenging virus, the like we’ve never seen before.

Ericka Nelson

> On Oct 18, 2020, at 3:49 PM, Linda Lambert via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
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> Different areas have different experiences. In fact, in my county – all together as of last week, there were only 22 deaths and that is since last March.  I think the big jump in numbers happens in the larger cities – certainly not here in the rural areas.  I don’t know of a single person who has had this virus – not even a mention of anyone in the local pipelines.  Our director of Challenges knows of no one – and she certain would be informed – so for folks in areas like where I live, there is nothing going on at all and never has been.  Lynda
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> From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Ann Chiappetta via Stylist
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> Wow, NY is still observing social and physical distancing limitations. Some schools have opened and now we have outbreaks in those areas. Stay safe and stay in touch!
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> Ann Chiappetta, Author
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> Hi Annie,
> thanks for the input, very hopeful. You're absolutely right about the time date stamp on my computer.
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> I hope everything is okay with you – we opened up to tourists on Saturday. The locals are holding their breath that we don't get a resurgence of the virus. Over 10,000 people arrived Friday and Saturday. Airport personnel were overwhelmed with testing people and checking their paperwork. How is it where you are? Stay safe.
> Aloha,
> Deb
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> From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Ann Chiappetta via Stylist
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> Hi,
> Folks can certainly chime in on this subject. I am by no means a copyright expert.
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> This is previously published in my short story collection. I’ve not been so concerned with having my work stolen because I can prove through my computer’s hard drive that I was the original creator, time stamp, all that nifty technical  stuff. If you are concerned, then consult a copyright attorney but other than that, I’d say be more concerned with having publishers reject your work if it was previously published on a blog or online magazine, not over email. Email is not considered “previously published,”, at least not in 99% as far as I’ve come across in the past 20 years.
> The Slate and Style
> magazine is a  legit source for publishing.  So something accepted to Slate and Style would technically  not be considered acceptable to  another  publisher with rules on not taking previously published work.
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> Best,
> Annie
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> Ann Chiappetta, Author
> Anniecms64 at gmail.com
> ` Making meaningful connections with others through writing `
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> 914.393.6605
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> “We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us.”
> n   Joseph Campbell
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> From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Debra Braiman via Stylist
> Sent: Friday, October 16, 2020 9:11 PM
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> Hi Annie,
> do you retain the right to anything that you put on this? Or do we lose the right to publish elsewhere? I'm thinking because in November there having articles to be submitted for Christmas. I have some short stories and poems.
> Thanks a lot, Deb Braiman
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> From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Ann Chiappetta via Stylist
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> Hi,
> You are very welcome. 😊
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> Ann Chiappetta, Author
> Anniecms64 at gmail.com
> ` Making meaningful connections with others through writing `
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> 914.393.6605
> www.annchiappetta.com Facebook Annie Chiappetta
> “We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us.”
> n   Joseph Campbell
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> From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Chris Kuell via Stylist
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> Hey Annie,
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> This was a great flash piece. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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> Chris
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> From: Stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Ann Chiappetta via Stylist
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> Trolley Ride
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> Excerpt from A String of Stories From the Heart to the Future C 2020
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> By Ann Chiappetta
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> Tara didn’t like foil prints. They reminded her of those tacky velvet paintings sold at roadside stands down South. But this one was different. The headlamp on the trolley seemed to flicker, and the 3–D effect appealed to her sense of whimsy. She lifted it from the rack and took a closer look. The trolley crested a swelling hill; the steep sweep of Hyde Street sank below the trolley’s bottom like the first plummet of a roller coaster. Alcatraz Island filled the rear ground, gray and forbidding. She nodded, satisfied. This was how she wanted to remember San Francisco.
> She looked at the picture again, not comprehending the shift when it occurred. The longer she looked at the water, the wilder it became. Her eyes widened. The headlamp on the trolley flashed in the afternoon sun. A conductor greeted a passenger. The brakeman fiddled with a lever. She looked away and glanced outside the small shop to the street beyond. No trolley.
> She closed her eyes, counted to ten, and opened them. Vertigo gripped her the instant she looked at the foil print again. She watched, terrified, as a miniature doppelganger boarded the cable car and took a seat.
> Hadn’t she just done this? She’d ridden the trolley down Hyde Street to the Embarcadero only an hour ago. Now she was watching it happen again. Panic and confusion remained with her in the shop as her double smiled in anticipation of a relaxing ride.
> The photo–cum–video played out its scenario. The trolley carried the replica down the hill. She stood in this shop, yet all her senses were engulfed in the framed event.
> Tara tried to look down at her arm, feel the weight of the plastic shopping bags she knew were there, but felt only the hardwood bench under her other, earlier self. A familiar breeze brushed her cheek, and the briny air tingled her nose. She tried putting the picture down but couldn’t move. Fear bubbled in her bowels, and helpless tears stood unshed in her hazel eyes.
> The cable car grated to a halt in front of the store. Horrified, Tara watched her other self enter the store, where her first self stood. The photo turned icy–hot, leaving her with a queer numbness in her whole body. It slipped from her grip, landed on a corner, and pirouetted before falling with a muffled thump onto the carpeted floor.
> Glancing about, careful not to draw unwanted attention, Tara took a steadying breath, stepped over the print, and left the store.
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> Ann Chiappetta, Author
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