[Stylist] The Oddysey of Homer One--second draft
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Tue Oct 5 23:47:42 UTC 2021
Hi Sean-
I think this is good, but one word struck me as not fitting, “scabbard,”. I thought, Huzzah, take that you enemy!. 😊 Not quite a sifi term. Maybe a good synonym would be ‘case’ or something more like it.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing,
Annie
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Sent: Tuesday, October 5, 2021 2:20 PM
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Subject: [Stylist] The Oddysey of Homer One--second draft
Dear Writer's division
I am writing to share with you the latest draft of my story, the Oddysey of Homer One.
My thanks to those of you who commented, on the first draft. I think you will see most of your points address in this latest version.
Shawn Jacobson
sdj60259 at aol.com
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