[Stylist] The Oddysey of Homer One--second draft

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Hi Sean-

I think this is good, but one word struck me as not fitting, “scabbard,”. I thought, Huzzah, take that you enemy!. 😊 Not quite a sifi term. Maybe a good synonym would be ‘case’ or something more like it.

 

Thanks for sharing and keep writing,

Annie

 

 

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Subject: [Stylist] The Oddysey of Homer One--second draft

 

Dear Writer's division 

 

I am writing to share with you the latest draft of my story, the Oddysey of Homer One.

 

My thanks to those of you who commented, on the first draft.  I think you will see most of your points address in this latest version.

Shawn Jacobson
sdj60259 at aol.com

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