[Stylist] poem

[Shawn Jacobson]

Cool!  I like it.
Shawn

Shawn Jacobson
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From: Kevin Pirnie via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org>
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 Roses are red and violets are purple  Your love is like Maple Surple We are all individual’s unique in every way   Be kind and love one another like brothers and sisters I pray 
On Mon, Aug 30, 2021 at 11:17 AM Chris Kuell via Stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:

Hi Annie, I don’t know if you wanted people to respond personally rather than to the group, but I’ve never been much for rules. I like this poem—it evokes emotion and pain and sorrow. But to me, the last line falls flat. ’numb fingers of sky’ rhymes with the previous line, but it leaves me scratching my head rather than feeling satisfied.  Others, of course, might feel differently. Thanks for sharing, Chris From: Stylist <stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org> On Behalf Of Ann Chiappetta via Stylist
Sent: Saturday, August 28, 2021 3:16 PM
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Subject: [Stylist] poem To reply to me individually email anniecms64 at gmail.comPoverty of the SoulBy Ann Chiappetta Come, come to meRake the soul with the shame of slaveryLend your arm of justice to those who weepDrag the scalpel of righteousness, blood welling, deep.Cry, cry for methe citizenThe sister, the victim, the mother, the old one, the immigrant, the childLift the prison, the poverty Infecting the collective mind Pray, pray with meskin on knees thinned and bruised by pleaseintended to Reach ears on HighWhere hope falls like rain between numb fingers of sky. 2021     Ann Chiappetta, AuthorAnniecms64 at gmail.com` Making meaningful connections with others through writing ` 914.393.6605www.annchiappetta.com Facebook Annie Chiappetta“We must let go of the life we have planned, so as to accept the one that is waiting for us.”    
   -  Joseph Campbell
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