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[jackieleepoet at cox.net]

Shawn,

It took me some time to read your story. I have stopped reading science fiction the past ten years, and because it was long. However, You had two most interesting and really good critiques. I had saved it awaiting time to read it.

I am truly impressed with the imagination you have displayed. It has so many original ideas, and it has a most interesting premise. 

I particularly liked your sensitivity  and thoughts about religion, and humanity’s disregard about taking care of the planet they had.

Your treatment of the advanced development of all of the devices meant to assist the blind in survival were fascinating .

I  will re-read the reviews of my two favorite critiquers now.

Jackie Williams

 

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Dear writers 

 

I am writing to share my latest story; I am doing so because I would like anyone who wants to take a crack at being a sensitivity reader to look at this to make sure I am not being stupid in describing how totally blind people would function in the futuristic setting that I am describing.  I know how I do things, but I am a high partial type person and I understand that someone totally blind would have different techniques/a different perspective on things.

 

Also, if anyone has stylistic suggestions, or finds typos/mispellings, please let me know.

 

Thanks in advance for your help.

Shawn Jacobson
sdj60259 at aol.com <mailto:sdj60259 at aol.com> 

(301)915-5881

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