[Stylist] poem feedback welcome
Ann Chiappetta
anniecms64 at gmail.com
Tue Feb 27 17:51:40 UTC 2024
Hi all-
My email for Feedback is anniecms64 at gmail.com <mailto:anniecms64 at gmail.com>
This is a modified ghazal poem. It uses couplets independent from one
another and a strong repetitive word. Originally I read it was also rigid
regarding the meter and syllabic style but those written in English arent
adhered to as strictly.
Read more here:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghazal#:~:text=A%20ghazal%20commonly%20consist
s%20of,those%20of%20the%20Petrarchan%20sonnet.
I played with it a bit and this is the result.
Mileage
Ann Chiappetta
rain blows east
wind pushes east
chalet slopes west
high rise faces east
90° of north
Going home is east
The dog star howls
summer bright in the east
distance dilutes Love
>From west to east
Ann, said the loved boy
Return to me
I wept in the west
and faced east
2023
Ann Chiappetta, MS
President, Friends In Art, Inc.
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