[stylist] Can you help me with this sentence

[James Canaday M.A. N6YR]

dear Angela,
unfortunately some sentences have to be mouthfuls.  the "which is 
available to the general student population" probably can become its 
own sentence, and that alone will help this one.  only thing I can 
see to do unless you move some definitions to short declarative 
sentences before.
jc

Jim Canaday M.A.
Lawrence, KS

At 06:11 PM 11/1/2008, you wrote:
>It compels educational institutions to make accessible to people with
>disabilities all information, textbooks, handouts, etc. which is available
>to the general student population.
>
>I'm talking about title 3 of the ADA, the "access to information" section.
>Should I have said "which are available?" This sentence sounds like a
>mouthful.
>
>Thank you
>
>Angela Fowler
>
>fowlers at syix.com
>
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