[stylist] Can you help me with this sentence

[Angela fowler]

Yes, Judith, thank you. That's a good rewording.   

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The ADA compels educational institutions to make accessible to people with
disabilities all information  which is available to the general student
population.  This information includes textbooks and all information that
reaches the student via the written word.  For handicapped students, these
information sources must be adapted so that they are accessable to each
student in a form compatible with their handicap.


----- Original Message -----
From: "Angela fowler" <fowlers at syix.com>
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Sent: Saturday, November 01, 2008 8:11 PM
Subject: [stylist] Can you help me with this sentence


> It compels educational institutions to make accessible to people with
> disabilities all information, textbooks, handouts, etc. which is available
> to the general student population.
>
> I'm talking about title 3 of the ADA, the "access to information" section.
> Should I have said "which are available?" This sentence sounds like a
> mouthful.
>
> Thank you
>
> Angela Fowler
>
> fowlers at syix.com
>
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