[stylist] last chapter
Judith Bron
jbron at optonline.net
Wed Nov 4 22:46:18 UTC 2009
Helene, I read the last chapter. The ending is open ended. I understand that you want to write a sequil, but the story itself has to come to some sort of conclusion. Question: Is Nadia wearing a frill dress like a young girl symbolic of her immaturity? That point isn't clear.
My advice is to put it away for awhile and come back in a month or two with new eyes. I've done that. It helps a lot. Judith
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