[stylist] The heart of it: chapter 1.

LoriStay at aol.com LoriStay at aol.com
Mon Oct 5 17:59:31 UTC 2009


Alan, leave out the phrase "Something like that."   It weakens the line!
Lori
In a message dated 10/5/09 10:22:01 AM, awheeler at neb.rr.com writes:


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> On the other hand, though, ask her to express her love for him, and it as 
> if she were pathologically shy, or mute or something like that.
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