[stylist] The heart of it: chapter 1.

[LoriStay at aol.com]

Same comment here for "in a manner of speaking."   It isn't necessary.   If 
you do this a lot, it would be a good idea to go through your chapter and 
ask yourself, what does this actually add?   If nothing, ditch it.   Might as 
well go for impact.    
Lori
In a message dated 10/5/09 10:22:01 AM, awheeler at neb.rr.com writes:


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> Ask her to talk about some way, big or small in which Michael may have 
> hurt her, even just with a unintended sleight, and her emotional throat closed 
> up and her voice was, in a manner of speaking, gone.
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