[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon: How can the end be improved?

helene ryles dreamavdb at googlemail.com
Fri Oct 30 19:19:02 UTC 2009


I'm wondering, would it be better if Wendy and Mrs bird were simply
killed, then it would make it less ambigious and leave readers
wondering about their recovery.
Or maybe I could scrap that bit altogether?
Leave it with just the first article where the hearing impaired unit
is closed down.

Nadia is suffering from PTSD. To have gone through all what she has it
would be rather unatural if she didn't.

Is there anything else that would help the ending?

Helene




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