[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon: How can the end be improved?

[Barbara Hammel]

You've already got us wondering what will happen to Nadia.  Why not have 
Madrella get caught?
You could leave the details for a later book but right now I would agree 
that it's way too unfinished.
Barbara

Snow is God's way of reminding us that beauty can be found even in the 
coldest hearts.

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From: "helene ryles" <dreamavdb at googlemail.com>
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> I'm wondering, would it be better if Wendy and Mrs bird were simply
> killed, then it would make it less ambigious and leave readers
> wondering about their recovery.
> Or maybe I could scrap that bit altogether?
> Leave it with just the first article where the hearing impaired unit
> is closed down.
>
> Nadia is suffering from PTSD. To have gone through all what she has it
> would be rather unatural if she didn't.
>
> Is there anything else that would help the ending?
>
> Helene
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