[stylist] Trials of an honorary Dragon: How can the end be improved?

[helene ryles]

Thanks for your advice Lori.
I can't think of anything as yet, but I'm hoping something will spring
to mind later on.

Helene

On 30/10/2009, Barbara Hammel <poetlori8 at msn.com> wrote:
> You've already got us wondering what will happen to Nadia.  Why not have
> Madrella get caught?
> You could leave the details for a later book but right now I would agree
> that it's way too unfinished.
> Barbara
>
> Snow is God's way of reminding us that beauty can be found even in the
> coldest hearts.
>
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>> I'm wondering, would it be better if Wendy and Mrs bird were simply
>> killed, then it would make it less ambigious and leave readers
>> wondering about their recovery.
>> Or maybe I could scrap that bit altogether?
>> Leave it with just the first article where the hearing impaired unit
>> is closed down.
>>
>> Nadia is suffering from PTSD. To have gone through all what she has it
>> would be rather unatural if she didn't.
>>
>> Is there anything else that would help the ending?
>>
>> Helene
>>
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