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[helene ryles]

Hi Lori,
Thanks for correcting grammar.
In this world modern inventions (such as CI, trains, solar panelling)
etc run side by side with magical items such as (flying carpets,
seeker stones, firtility charms).

That's just the way my world operates.

Helene

On 07/09/2009, LoriStay at aol.com <LoriStay at aol.com> wrote:
> Add a comma before your quote marks (presuming that's how they do it in
> England?).
> I'm thinking that a cochlear implant is a modern scientific invention
> (technological) but your story is magical.   Perhaps you could invent
> something
> that works similarly to the implant, but call it something else, and modify
> the way it works, so long as it is magical?   Otherwise, it's like giving a
> cell phone to one of the dragons, and feels out of place.
> Lori
> In a message dated 9/5/09 4:43:09 PM, dreamavdb at googlemail.com writes:
>
>
>>
>> "Never mind Talmon, you could be dead by the time he gets to us"
>>
>
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