[stylist] DBG 7 (completely new chapter)

[helene ryles]

Barbara: I'll do that then. I'll just mention her as his aunt.

Helene

On 17/09/2009, Barbara Hammel <poetlori8 at msn.com> wrote:
> Why not instead of Nora, it be someone already in the book.  Does he get
> along with her family?  It might be all right if you just said his aunt.  If
> she never figures into the story again, she doesn't need a name.
> Barbara
>
> If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of whom
> you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.
>
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> From: "helene ryles" <dreamavdb at googlemail.com>
> Sent: Wednesday, September 16, 2009 5:11 PM
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> Subject: Re: [stylist] DBG 7 (completely new chapter)
>
>> Shelley: I'm glad you like this story so far. Thanks very much for
>> your feedback.
>> I've sent a timeline of the date each chapter takes place.
>> Let me know if it helps any?
>> I'm also planning to make a list of all the characters.
>>
>> Also I mean to have a glossary of terms at the end of the book. I read
>> a book that had one which was set in Afganistan called 'the
>> breadwinner'. I found it a really good book. The names of things that
>> didnt have english translation was at the end of the book.
>>
>> I'm wondering if people think Nadir and Nadia are differant? The only
>> really new character is Mr Murat as Nadia and her mom have been writen
>> about before.
>>
>> The story is about Nadia's life and also that of her aunt Liza. who
>> are the main characters.
>>
>> Sorry about the grammar. Grammar and spelling isn't my strong point. I
>> do run it through the spell check when I've findished chapters or you
>> would find even more badly spelt words. Unfortunately the spell check
>> just gives you a list of words to use and I sometimes accidently use
>> the wrong one.
>>
>> Arielle is Liza's aunt and has been mentioned breifly in chapter 3.
>> Mr Murrat's aunt Nora doesn't come into it. Would it be less confusing
>> if he just called her his aunt?
>> The painful curse is the same as Crusendi curse that J K rowling used
>> only I call it 'the painful curse.
>>
>> Helene
>>
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