[stylist] FLM Comments

[Shelley J. Alongi]

Hello Helene, Everyone has their own preferences for reading. Thanks for 
going out on a limb and sending your stuff to us. I do read your work though 
I don't always comment. Keep writing. You have a great gift for story 
telling.
Shelley J. Alongi
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updated September 13, 2009
----- Original Message ----- 
From: "helene ryles" <dreamavdb at googlemail.com>
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2009 12:53 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] FLM Comments


> Hi Shelley,
> I wish you the best of luck with this book you are writing. I find
> your advice about 'Trials of an honorary dragon' very useful so I'm
> sorry I've not made any comments about your story. I read mainly young
> children and teenage fiction. I'm afraid I don't read much adult
> fiction at all, unless it's a fantasy novel or the main character is
> differant in some way.
>
> Helene
>
> On 22/09/2009, Barbara Hammel <poetlori8 at msn.com> wrote:
>> Hey, is he ever going to need to talk in length about that incident?  If 
>> so,
>> make us cry.  I love a book that makes me cry.
>> Barbara
>>
>> If wisdom's ways you wisely seek, five things observe with care:  of whom
>> you speak, to whom you speak, and how and when and where.
>>
>> --------------------------------------------------
>> From: "Shelley J. Alongi" <qobells at roadrunner.com>
>> Sent: Tuesday, September 22, 2009 1:05 AM
>> To: "NFBnet Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
>> Subject: [stylist] FLM Comments
>>
>>> Thanks for all your input so far. I'm glad to see my writing is
>>> descriptive enough to make one hungry and keeps you turning the page. I
>>> appreciate all the comments. Judith I'm convinced you're my biggest fan.
>>> This story is the most conflicted story I've written and so I'm trying 
>>> out
>>>
>>> lot of different techniques though it does carry my voice. Thanks for 
>>> all
>>> your words and to Barbara's comments about train engineers being 
>>> heartless
>>>
>>> if they don't regret hitting someone, no train engineer I've ever met 
>>> and
>>> that has been few has ever been heartless. One told me it hurts to see
>>> people step out in front of a train. Another one wanted counselling. 
>>> Keep
>>> sending comments if you can it helps me refine the craft.
>>> Shelley J. Alongi
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>>> updated September 13, 2009
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