[stylist] Feedback request

[BDM]

Lori,

Thanks. Still working that out in my head :).

Brad


At 11:30 AM 5/10/2010, you wrote:
>There is a lot of interest right now in controlling gangs, so I'd say go 
>with it, so long as the method(s) used to extract the gang member would be 
>useful for your readers.
>Lori
>On May 7, 2010, at 4:57:11 PM, BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com> wrote:
>
>From:BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com>
>Subject:[stylist] Feedback request
>Date:May 7, 2010 4:57:11 PM EDT
>To:"Writers Division" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
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>Hi List,
>
>I have an idea for a book, a suspenseful mystery surrounding the extraction
>of a gang member by a team of folks. The reader does not know or isn't let
>in on the connection of the team members until the end along with the gang
>member now with a new life change. Last year my wife and I were goin g to
>take a November 50,000 word challenge done by a writer's org, I can't
>recall now. At any rate I made it about 5000 words and have tweaked it
>here and there, but I wonder if what I have holds interest enough, if its
>moving forward enough? If it is worth pursuing from here, I'll invest time
>into applying the punctuation guides I've gotten here :). This is a first
>crack at any project of this size/nature. File attached in 2003 Word Doc,
>any feedback is appreciated, short or detailed comments welcome.
>
>Rating is:
>
>*Some violence
>*One explitive :)
>
>Thanks in advance.
>
>Brad
>
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