[stylist] Feedback request

[loristay]

There is a lot of interest right now in controlling gangs, so I'd say go with it, so long as the method(s) used to extract the gang member would be useful for your readers.
Lori
On May 7, 2010, at 4:57:11 PM, BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com> wrote:

From:   BDM <lists at braddunsemusic.com>
Subject:    [stylist] Feedback request
Date:   May 7, 2010 4:57:11 PM EDT
To: "Writers Division" <stylist at nfbnet.org>
Attachments:    1 Attachment, 77.5 KB
Hi List,

I have an idea for a book, a suspenseful mystery surrounding the extraction 
of a gang member by a team of folks. The reader does not know or isn't let 
in on the connection of the team members until the end along with the gang 
member now with a new life change. Last year my wife and I were going to 
take a November 50,000 word challenge done by a writer's org, I can't 
recall now. At any rate I made it about 5000 words and have tweaked it 
here and there, but I wonder if what I have holds interest enough, if its 
moving forward enough? If it is worth pursuing from here, I'll invest time 
into applying the punctuation guides I've gotten here :). This is a first 
crack at any project of this size/nature. File attached in 2003 Word Doc, 
any feedback is appreciated, short or detailed comments welcome.

Rating is:

*Some violence
*One explitive :)

Thanks in advance.

Brad 

Word Project.doc (77.5 KB)
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