[stylist] Accessible electric stoves?

[PAUL BAVER]

Good morning Lori your comments and advice is also very useful for me to 
understand where I'm going with my lack of understanding the process of 
writing Thank you for your suggestions Paul E Baver.
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From: "loristay" <loristay at aol.com>
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Sent: Monday, May 24, 2010 10:11 PM
Subject: Re: [stylist] Accessible electric stoves?


Paul, I would like to add to Donna's comments. You need to look out for 
homonyms! in golfed means someone was playing golf, perhaps? And even then 
it isn't precisely right. the word would be engulfed: e n g u l f e d.
She may have said it, but leave out the comma after gun. Frantically is 
spelled f r a n t i c a l l y. The sentence needs to be broken into a couple 
of sentences.

You might well use the services of an editor, but bear in mind these 
services do not come cheap.
Before you look for one, make sure you have done as much with your writing 
yourself to minimize the cost.
Lori

On May 24, 2010, at 7:16:20 PM, "Donna Hill" <penatwork at epix.net> wrote:


Block quote
With in milliseconds, I felt that cold bone chilling feeling, return to
my mind, and became in golfed with fear. As I looked at him
standing there, pointing that gun, directly at me, franticly I started
to turn away, my mind raced with uncertainty, and doubt, for my safety.
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