[stylist] Short story: warrior

[Danielle Montour]

Hi,
I wrote this story two years ago when I was 11, and I want to 
improve it.  I still want to keep it a short story, I just want 
to make it better.  Could anyone help me with this? Also, if I'm 
not supposed to send attachments to this list, I'm sorry.  I 
never heard I couldn't, so I'm assuming that it's ok.

Danielle
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