[stylist] Vejas - christmas story

[Chris Kuell]

Hi Vejas,

I enjoyed your story very much, especially the part where your math teacher 
was your Aunt's new fiancee. I don't know where you live that you could go 
skiing before school--but I'd like to move there!
A few comments for you to consider:
1. I think it sounds better to say a run-down of your day rather than a 
run-up. Perhaps that's just the difference from where you live and where I 
live, though.
2.You wrote - When I got to my desk, he handed me a 0 percent math test.- 
This reads clunky to me, since 0% is used like an adjective, when it's a 
score. Perhaps this would be better - He handed me a math test. On the top, 
in bright red pen was written 0%. It was underlined 3 times, just to be sure 
I understood. - or something like that.

Keep up the good work.

chris