[stylist] Christmas Assignment: Dear Mr. Claus (Slightly suggestive, one minor explitive)
Brad Dunsé
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Sat Dec 10 22:17:08 UTC 2011
Brenda
You're probably right on that, but I think that
is the songwriter in me trying to reach as many
audiences as possible in one swoop hahaha. Very
honestly I didn't think anything on this until I
opened up a Word doc, wrote Dear Mr. Claus, and
just let come out what came out, with a couple
grammar checks after. Glad you enjoyed it.
Brad
On 12/10/2011 02:59 PM Brenda said...
>Hi Brad
>I can't believe this hasn't been published
>somewhere. I've never read anything like it. I
>think you could have eliminated the stuff about
>Santa and the mother-inlaw and the story would
>have been just as good, but it was amusing.
>
>I really enjoyed it.
>Brenda
>
>On 12/7/2011 7:20 AM, Brad Dunsé wrote:
>>The below is lightly suggestive and one minor
>>expletive, nothing horrible, but there's my
>>disclaimer :). I wasn't sure what to write but
>>just took this for a needed time of free-form idea musing. My
>>internet has been out for updating the past
>>couple days so I might be playing catch up a bit.
>>
>>Dear Mr. Claus:
>>
>>I am writing with respect to last year's
>>Christmas. It might seem a bit odd to you I am
>>not writing on behalf of a trumped up gift
>>list, or making plea that I've been a good boy
>>this year--after all, that incident at the
>>company party last month had no meaning to it
>>whatsoever. Besides, it was dark in that
>>closet, how was I supposed to know that wasn't
>>my wife! Well there was a matter of that
>>strange birthmark, and at the time I did
>>question the size of her ... never mind, that
>>is not the issue ... Well, OK then, her feet
>>OK? I was about to say her feet! Geesh, what a
>>mind you have, no wonder you've got elves
>>running around up there like the Pied Piper crashing a mouse convention.
>>
>>Nevertheless, I am writing in advance to seek
>>restitution to damages incurred last 24th of
>>December. My intentions--I can assure you--are
>>quite dogmatic in nature, and I intend to be
>>fully compensated. I've spoken to my attorney
>>regarding services rendered, if necessary, and
>>he assures me that due to your jurisdiction,
>>that even if you have in your possession, a
>>Claus clause, because the North Pole bi-laws
>>contains a few major flaws, your Claus clause
>>will not stand up in the U. S. court of laws;,
>>and might as well be written on a piece of
>>gauze, and that sir, draws from me, a very large applause.
>>
>>That said please find the following complaints:
>>
>>1. Roof damage: Upon your kangaroo-style
>>landing on our roof last year--thank you very
>>much, you and your steel-railed wooden crate
>>took out three roof vents, one satellite dish,
>>and approximately 200 square feet of roofing of
>>which we can no longer match color or
>>manufacturer; furthermore, shingling over the
>>existing roof puts the load bearing weight over
>>code, which will now require the roof to be
>>stripped, papered, and an entire new roof
>>installed. Additionally when you lit out of
>>here, you snagged your sleigh runners on our
>>string of decor lights of the leg-lamp chimney
>>ornament and smashed it into the neighbor's
>>picture window--I suspect you'll be getting a letter from him as well.
>>
>>2. Christmas Wreath: When you were coughing
>>your way down the chimney without care, one of
>>your smart alec reindeer unhitched himself,
>>jumped down off the roof and ate the Pine cone
>>decoration hanging off the front deck! Don't
>>you feed them things? What are they goats with
>>branches strapped on their heads or what? I'm
>>not sure but I think it was the one pawing at
>>his bubble-nose. If I didn't know better, I'd
>>swear it was Jimmy Derandi reincarnated to one of your antlered goats.
>>
>>3. Carpet Replacement: After you plucked
>>yourself from the chimney flue and doused your
>>pretty little outfit with the glass of milk,
>>putting out the fabric fire--I do apologize for
>>that one; I probably ought have let it burn out
>>before you shoved yourself down that cement
>>straw, but honestly, you'd think the smoke
>>coming out the top would have given you a clue?
>>Surely, the coughing, hacking, and sneezing of
>>your lead goat would have given some indication
>>of a fire in the hole when you so elegantly
>>performed your bounce-n-skid landing.
>>
>>At any rate, when you excreted yourself from
>>the fire grate, you got ash and soot all over
>>the carpet--stomping black footprints all the
>>way over to the milk and cookies. And don't
>>think I didn't see the prints headed to the
>>fridge, a six-pack of beer missing, and more
>>prints headed downstairs to the mother-in-law
>>quarters; I would like some explanation on that
>>one. I've been staving off my wife's inquiry
>>for the past 11-months as to why her mother
>>suddenly took up the pipe and holds her belly
>>while ho-hoing around the house with a grin the
>>kids can't understand. Back to the carpet, the
>>room size is 21-by-18-feet, creamy burbur with
>>half-inch nap, and none of that cheap foam
>>underlayment padding either. We'd like it
>>installed before the Christmas party next week
>>if you would; were throwing one for the Junior
>>Hunter Leagues meeting; we're lobbying for a
>>legalized season on reindeer, so watch your goats old man.
>>
>>4. Third Party Theft: Finally, I understand
>>your trepidation at the thought of jumping in
>>that fire pit and blowing your nose back up the
>>chimney, but you left the front door unlocked,
>>and little known to you as you were hoisting
>>your milk and cookie-self up the downspout to
>>the roof, bending it all to hell by the way why
>>didn't you just whistle one of your flying
>>goats down to swoosh you back up to the roof,
>>he didn't seem to have much problem floating
>>his way down when helping himself to the all
>>you can eat Pine cone buffet on the deck now
>>did he? Anyway, as you were beating cheeks up
>>to the roof, crumpling our gutter system,
>>unknown to you were two small -time filchers
>>who walked right in the door you left unlocked,
>>and made off with all the stuff you brought. I
>>think they were in the process of heisting our
>>TV and stereo too until they heard the crash of
>>the neighbors picture window you sent the leg
>>lamp sailing through. They got scared and ran
>>off with what they had in the car already.
>>
>>In summary then, please remit the below:
>>
>>$14,289 Roof replacement
>>$2,416.48 Carpet replacement
>>$835.47 Satellite dish
>>$48.26 Leg Lamp, decor lights and one 50-foot extension cord
>>$25.95 Pine cone wreath
>>
>>$17615.16 Total
>>
>>Oh, and when you come this year? Replenish the
>>six-pack you copped off me, and hands off the mother-in-law!
>>
>>Happy Holidays,
>>
>>I. A. Grinch
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>Brad Dunsé
>>
>>"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." --Oscar Wilde
>>
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