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[Brad Dunse']

Chris,

I think it depends on the scope of the project. Yes at 5k word count 
for a smaller project it would be a lot of real estate taken. Out  of 
say an 80k word novel, 6% might even be a bit  long to get into it, 
but you are introducing a group of characters. I've read 
published  works out there that were a whole lot slower to get into a 
story or first base. I still enjoyed the writing style, interaction 
in the story,  and how you kept it moving through action. You showed 
not told which makes a good writer. Perhaps you hadn't  thought of 
the entire projects storyline or conclusion? In songwriting it is 
called storyboarding. Basically knowing what revelations come at each 
base on the field before we hit it home :).

That brings a question with respect to longer projects which I'll put 
in another post.

Brad



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