[stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes prompt)

[vejas]

I guess cuz it takes place a long time ago, the characters may 
not be as realistic?
Vchjas


 ----- Original Message -----
From: "Robert Leslie Newman" <newmanrl at cox.net
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Date sent: Mon, 16 Jan 2012 16:26:53 -0600
Subject: Re: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes 
prompt)

Young mister V
RE: a challenge

You are a very creative thinker.  Your story about king  Peeley 
is a story
more about a story, rather then a story that happens in real time 
with
characters moving, breathing and doing what you say they did.  
What do you
think I mean? (I'm one of your biggest fans)


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Behalf Of vejas
Sent: Saturday, January 14, 2012 9:58 AM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org; bpollpeter at hotmail.com
Subject: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes 
prompt)

This story has to do more with personality change.  Since I have 
lots going
on, I don't have time to make a new one.  I wrote this in seventh 
grade for
social studies and expanded upon it.
Suggestions for changes to the writing are more than welcome.
Vejas
PS I think my personality change might be a bit unrealistic.
Bridgit, feel free to comment to the list.



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