[stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes prompt)

[Donna Hill]

Hey Vejas,
Donna Hill here. There is a lot of literature from a long time ago that is
as realistic as anything written nowadays. People are pretty much the same
throughout the ages. They may have different things in their environments,
but the basic human emotions and struggles are constant throughout history.
Whether it's the Bible, Homer's Iliad and Odyssey, the Old English poem
Beowulf or the Dickens and Twain novels of the 19th century, something
always rings true for modern readers. I guess this is my way of saying that
I think you should give Robert's question another think, and don't use the
setting of your story as an excuse.
Donna


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From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
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Sent: Monday, January 16, 2012 6:22 PM
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Subject: Re: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes prompt)

I guess cuz it takes place a long time ago, the characters may 
not be as realistic?
Vchjas


 ----- Original Message -----
From: "Robert Leslie Newman" <newmanrl at cox.net
To: "'Writer's Division Mailing List'" <stylist at nfbnet.org
Date sent: Mon, 16 Jan 2012 16:26:53 -0600
Subject: Re: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes 
prompt)

Young mister V
RE: a challenge

You are a very creative thinker.  Your story about king  Peeley 
is a story
more about a story, rather then a story that happens in real time 
with
characters moving, breathing and doing what you say they did.  
What do you
think I mean? (I'm one of your biggest fans)


-----Original Message-----
From: stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org 
[mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On
Behalf Of vejas
Sent: Saturday, January 14, 2012 9:58 AM
To: stylist at nfbnet.org; bpollpeter at hotmail.com
Subject: [stylist] king peeley and the integra tea (changes 
prompt)

This story has to do more with personality change.  Since I have 
lots going
on, I don't have time to make a new one.  I wrote this in seventh 
grade for
social studies and expanded upon it.
Suggestions for changes to the writing are more than welcome.
Vejas
PS I think my personality change might be a bit unrealistic.
Bridgit, feel free to comment to the list.



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