[stylist] Writing prompt- gratitude

[Eve Sanchez]

Robert, I thought I had made that clear in the first line or so. I was
speaking of comments to a particular FB link that was posted. I did not
think it necessary or appropriate to name eacch writer of each specific
post when there were so many that I was speaking of in a general manner.
Hence the words 'some' and 'many'. Also, just to let you all know; there
were paragraphs when I hit send, but I have no control over what the
virtual copy editor does after that. This is why I also attached. Thanks
for reding. Eve

On Thu, Nov 8, 2012 at 6:16 AM, Robert Leslie Newman <newmanrl at cox.net>wrote:

> Eve
>
> I've been thinking about your piece. I sure felt your passion, that came
> across well - good job on that. The part that struck me during the reading
> was - how much of this is Eve's opinion and like some of the things you
> reported that others were saying, like where did they come from? Again,
> it's
> believability in my head was greatly compromised. Somewhere in there  I
> felt
> you needed to help the reader know that this wasn't just your rant,
> something based upon rumor and/or on some small splinter faction that
> really
> didn't deserve being given airtime! So yeah, I would like to see this again
> if I could see just who and where these - very interesting views life.)
>
>
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