[stylist] Learning Project Writing Plays

[Eve Sanchez]

I have not yet had a chance to sit and go through Keitei's play but
asuradly will. I just wanted to let Chris know that I had never heard of
this play he mentioned 'Dog Sees God' but I intend to look it up. Sounds
powerful. With such an important message, I wish it would be played across
the country and in our high schools if appropriate. I will sit down and
read your post and play tomorrow Keitei, when it is less hectic here.
Thanks for taking the time for this. Happy thanksgiving. Eve

On Thu, Nov 22, 2012 at 4:05 PM, Chris Kuell <ckuell at comcast.net> wrote:

> Hey Keitei,
>
> Thanks for sharing your script so far. My first comment is that I was
> disappointed it ended! I was getting into it, and yet it isn't finished. It
> strikes me as a solid start, and obviously covers a deep, important topic.
> I did see a couple of minor typos, and I wondered why, in act 2, Angel
> needed to toss the rock at Catharine's window, since Angel had already
> called on the phone. My other comment is that I'd like to see more
> character development, although if this is a 5 or even 10 minute play,
> there's not a lot of time for that. You might want to make it longer.
>
> On a side note, yet related to your play and the youtube video you sent,
> have you ever seen 'Dog Sees God'? I went to see it last spring at our
> community theatre, and it was probably the most powerful show I've ever
> seen. At our theatre, they ended with the actors reading bios of young
> people who have committed suicide over being bullied about their sexual
> orientation. I don't think a single person in the audience or on stage
> wasn't crying when they finished. It's a tragedy that quite simply has to
> stop.
>
> Thanks for sharing,
>
> chris
>
>
>
>
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