[stylist] my response to chris's prompt: re-post

[Eve Sanchez]

Vejas, This is a short story with less than 2 thousand words. I would
seriously suggest not designating chapters when they are more like
paragraphs. Sharpen up the dialogue and edit  and you might just have
something there. Eve

On Sun, Feb 10, 2013 at 8:07 PM, vejas <brlsurfer at gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
> I sent my prompt in on Friday, but I'm not sure whether anyone got it.
>  I'm thinking that possibly my subject of "my short story" wasn't very
> clear, since it was right in the middle of other threads.  Or maybe my
> story's just too long (1556 words).
> Here it is again, with spelling corrections, in case anyone still wants to
> look at it.
> I'd really appreciate your feedback on it, and I want to say thank you to
> anyone who looks at it.  I'm sorry if there were any problems.
> Thanks.
> Vejas
>
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