[stylist] my response to chris's prompt: re-post

[vejas]

Eve,
Thanks for taking a look at it.
Do you have any suggesttions so that I can make the dialogue 
better?
Also, did you think it was funny or sad? I could see someone 
thinking either way.
Vejas

Thanks.
Vejas


 ----- Original Message -----
From: Eve Sanchez <3rdeyeonly at gmail.com
To: "Writer's Division Mailing List" <stylist at nfbnet.org
Date sent: Sun, 10 Feb 2013 21:14:13 -0800
Subject: Re: [stylist] my response to chris's prompt: re-post

Vejas, This is a short story with less than 2 thousand words.  I 
would
seriously suggest not designating chapters when they are more 
like
paragraphs.  Sharpen up the dialogue and edit  and you might just 
have
something there.  Eve

On Sun, Feb 10, 2013 at 8:07 PM, vejas <brlsurfer at gmail.com> 
wrote:

 Hi,
 I sent my prompt in on Friday, but I'm not sure whether anyone 
got it.
  I'm thinking that possibly my subject of "my short story" 
wasn't very
 clear, since it was right in the middle of other threads.  Or 
maybe my
 story's just too long (1556 words).
 Here it is again, with spelling corrections, in case anyone 
still wants to
 look at it.
 I'd really appreciate your feedback on it, and I want to say 
thank you to
 anyone who looks at it.  I'm sorry if there were any problems.
 Thanks.
 Vejas

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