[stylist] In the Storms of April

Jacqueline Williams jackieleepoet at cox.net
Sun Mar 24 21:47:04 UTC 2013


Lynda,
I liked your Pantoum. While it does not reflect Arizona weather, it took me
back with its imagery and the repetitive quality of the form.
While I have written several pantoums, my problem is that I never know when
one is finished. It does not give a line limit, and so seems easy to go on
too far. Your sequence may have inspired me to try again.
Thanks for sharing.
Jackie

-----Original Message-----
From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Lynda Lambert
Sent: Saturday, March 23, 2013 7:13 AM
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Subject: Re: [stylist] In the Storms of April

Here is a PANTOUM poem I wrote some time ago. It was written as a response
to the poet/author Jeff O'Brien in a conversation we were having via e-mail.

If you live in a place, as I do, where the seasons are distinct and clearly
defined, you will definitely feel what I am describing here, as our winter
is beginning the difficult merge into spring - and how it affects us all.

We just returned from our annual March visit to  Puerto Rico. In a five hour
flight, we went from warm sunshine and balmy breezes, to freezing
temperatures and snow covered landscape. 

Lynda
Lynda Lambert
104 River Road
Ellwood City, PA 16117

724 758 4979

My Blog:  http://www.walkingbyinnervision.blogspot.com
My Website:  http://lyndalambert.com



 
 





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