[stylist] be warned kind of creepy

[Myrna Badgerow]

You sound like me about this not being your habit except for me it is romantic poetry. Yes this is dark but it is still good poetry. I do agree with earlier comments about perhaps tightening up some of the lines but this is a great poem overall and I agree too that it's theme would be great during Halloween. 
Well done, Kyle!
Myrna

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On Mar 28, 2013, at 2:29 PM, Kyle woodard <wallacewoodard at gmail.com> wrote:

> Ok it's not usually my habbit to write creepy, dark or morbit poetry.
> However this poem or song or whaterver it is speaks to me for some reason
> and it is almost as if it rights itself it is very long and I am not quite
> sure what to do with it but thought I would share to get some opinions.
> some potential tieles are ghost ship, ghost story, and Demon Dance  and it
> is comprised of mostly all quatrains with a couple of couplets
> 
> AR 4.0
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> Kindred spirits one and all
> here we are let us fall
> we have traveled far together
> now we shall die and live forever
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> Seeking something out of sight
> giving up too tired to fight
> When the age has come and gone
> We shall still be singing our song
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> For some things don’t end with death
> For some things aren’t finished with a breath
> Creepy crawly all around
> Listen to us now making our sound
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> So what possessed us to be this way
> Haunting the world all night and day
> stories only tell one side of things
> leaving not q few loose strings
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> All of the answers to soothe your dreams
> lie tied up amidst twisted schemes
> IF you take one lesson from our song
> be aware that some decisions are wrong
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> We are past fixing our fate
> however there is still room on your plate
> So take heed and don’t follow us here
> some times it is good to have some fear
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> Turn away now from our doom
> Walk away from this room
> For if you stay here any longer
> we shall win growing stronger
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> Don’t follow us whatever you do
> and on the way out be sure to say Boo
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> It wasn’t initially our goal
> to lose our body without a soul
> however after all of our skirmishes and fighting
> we were left squabbling and back biting
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> Filled with hunger and greed
> trying to fill an empty need
> Once the darkness has a hold
> you grow bitter and your heart goes cold
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> Then you know you’re in a bind
> when you’d walk all over your own kind
> just to hold on to a bit of treasure
> just for a wee moments pleasure
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> But that’s the way we all went
> till we were all gone and downward sent
> now accursed to walk these shores
> coming a knocking on your doors
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> Be aware children run away
> only come out at the noon of day
> for if you are caught outside
> we’ll take you on a wild ride
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> one you won’t be forgeettign soon
> as we contemplate forthcoming doom
> run away and hide right quick
> watching out for us that slick
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> Now be good little kiddies and mind your manners
> Making sure to flee our banners
> for only time will tell
> whether you go to heaven or hell
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> So make up your mind and stick to it fast
> turn away from sin and make it your past
> or else we will come a calling
> we have no shame in helping you falling
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> So flee flee right now
> just open your bible to find out how
> Now we have come to the end of our tale
> but if you care to stay we have a spot open in our jail
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> Wallace Kyle Woodard IV
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