[stylist] help! need some ideas for this poem

[Chris Kuell]

Hey Barbara,

I know what you mean--it was sunny and 72 here on Monday, and now we have 2 
inches of snow on the ground. So yes, spring can be fickle and 
temperamental.

I don't really have suggestions for this poem, except to say that your 
stanzas aren't uniform in number of syllables, or meter, I believe the right 
phrase is. So to me, the words are fine, but the rhythm is off.

chris