[stylist] Writing exercise: creative nonfiction- Life Lessons

Sun Aug 2 18:37:57 UTC 2015

Chris,

Thanks. Yeah, I came to the current ending and wasn't quite sure where to go
at the moment, but yes, I would like to flesh this out more. Thanks for the
encouragement.

Bridgit

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Hey Bridgit,

I really think you have something here. I know you like to experiment with
form--despite your mother's warnings to stick precisely to the recipe--and
it really works here. The way you wove in the sensory details of cooking
with your memories of growing up is creative, yet easy to follow and
powerful. My one critique--it ends to abruptly! Keep it going.

Chris

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