[stylist] BH cinquain

[Barbara HAMMEL]

How's this, Jackie?

A DILEMMA
by Barbara Hammel

What's wrong
With a two-faced
Person is you're never
For certain with which face you are
Speaking.


Sent from my iPhone

> On Aug 9, 2015, at 20:18, Barbara HAMMEL via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
> 
> Such as in put a punctuation mark before the word you? I'm not coming up with another way to phrase currently.
> Barbara
> 
> Sent from my iPhone
> 
>> On Aug 9, 2015, at 19:50, Jackie Williams via stylist <stylist at nfbnet.org> wrote:
>> 
>> Barbara,
>> I finally got to the treasured cinquains.
>> This cinquain has a perfect topic, or theme. A lot of punch.
>> I find myself analyzing the6 syllable line, seeking clarification perhaps
>> through the punctuation. Can you take another read and see if you can find
>> another path? 
>> Please write more of them.
>> Jackie Lee
>> 
>> Time is the school in which we learn.
>> Time is the fire in which we burn.
>> Delmore Schwartz     
>> 
>> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: stylist [mailto:stylist-bounces at nfbnet.org] On Behalf Of Barbara
>> HAMMEL via stylist
>> Sent: Tuesday, August 04, 2015 12:10 PM
>> To: stylist
>> Cc: Barbara HAMMEL
>> Subject: [stylist] BH cinquain
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Here's my contribution to the cinquain writing:
>> 
>> A DILEMMA
>> by Barbara Hammel
>> 
>> You know,
>> What's wrong with a
>> Two-faced person is you
>> Never know with which face you are
>> Speaking.
>> 
>> Sent from my iPhone
>> 
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