[stylist] My first nonrhyming Goth poem,God Is Dead

[Semirhage]

Thanks, Jackie. before I try to publish this, I'll do a rework and I'm 
saving your comments to use and work with when I make the changes. So they 
are valued and appreciated and will be used.
Ciaran Corby is my pen name.
I began to feel very strongly, as does my husband, about the changes that 
constitute what is good poetry. Those bits that would totally kick the 
grates from hero to 0 as it were. LOL. I  wasn't sure what to think of it as 
my first nonrhyme  and my first Gothic attempt so I really appreciate your 
encouragement and it shall be used. I'll take the ball and run with it 
totally. LOL.
Sem
I'm friends with the monster that's under my bed.
I get along with the voices inside of my head.