[stylist] Poem - "Admirals" - Firstish Draft

[Chris Kuell]

Hi Bill,

This poem does strike me as a firstish draft, but I like it. I see potential
here. It's an accessible poem to we non-poets, yet it's not in-your-face
obvious--it still requires thought and contemplation. 
I understand why you ended with 'we true', but even so, it struck me when I
was reading as too abrupt. Does 'the true' work for you?

Thanks for sharing,

Chris