[stylist] workshopping: Lucy and Lithe

[Jamie Allison]

Miss Thea,
I read your submission today and wanted to say that you have me intrigued! I love your descriptive language (but thankful all the while that at times it wasn't too descriptive) and how your writing style makes the story flow from one part to the next. I really want to find out what happens next! 
I am hoping that sending this (as it's positive feedback) to the entire group is the right protocol for positive and more or less general response. I am sure there are times when it may be better to contact only the person who wrote the message and will do this instead if this is what is preferable.  Jamie Allison
National Federation of the Blind - Cherokee Chapter President
Lead Instructor, NFB BELL in SC
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